Our Thriller Comments..
All of the other groups assessed our thriller opening during today's lesson. We have included the comments that we received in this blog posting.
Group Q3-76 said that the clip was very eye-catching, with an effective narrative and good use of props. However, they also said that there was repetition of some images. although the image flashing worked well.
Group Q3-77 said that the choice and improvisation of locations was excellent. However, they also said that some images were not completely relevant although this was 'no major flaw'.
Group Q3-75 said that the editing was very successful, and the camera angles were also good. The voice-over was effective and the lighting was also good. They did not suggest any areas of improvement.
Group Q3-74 said that the lack of focus on speech and dialect created more impact within the clip. However, they also said that the images used during the flashing sequences were too repetitive.
To improve our thriller opening we would use a wider range of still images to avoid the repetition that we have been criticised on.